keith, some advise: after you pen a piece, let it sit overnight...

then edit it with the intent of conveying the same thoughts, but with few words...

we, your sometimes audience will be appreciative...cause much of what you do write now is too wordy an full of superfulous bull shit...sorta like melville...

Last edited by ed good; 10/05/20 05:09 PM.

keep it simple and keep it safe...