https://sportingbookworm.wordpress.com/2015/05/18/hunting-in-russia-pot-sport-and-freedom/

An addition to the blog, aka the draft of the future Chapter 1 of the book.

I really need your criticism here. I've been trying to give a glimpse into, an overview of, hunting in Russia. The thing is, gunmaking of a country is in symbiosis with the hunting in the country, one influencing another. I want to see if my 2000 words give a concise picture, if there are no points which aren't clear enough, or redundant information. In short, what would you like me to add, and what to remove (one can't go without another - a chapter is 2000 words long, and if I am to add a word, I have to delete another). Thanks in advance.

Russian Hunting Shotguns